What a boring

Hello, today I´m writing about reporter speech.
My mother told me that I should studied more, to get
beater marks. If I got good marks I´ll have a present. Maybe going
to the Warner Bross or the  amusement park. My mother
also told me that if I have normal marks for her, I´ll be grounded
maybe around one month and a half.
Then father told me as always that I need to be grounded
with out the TV, computer and the Wii.
I don´t  listen to then. I do the silly.

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Good work. I also think you should study and get good marks. Anyone one can do it, but you have to put in the effort. I revised your paragraph with a few changes. Read it over and practice!

"My mother told me that I should study more, so that I get better marks. If I get good marks they´ll give me a present. Maybe I'll get to go
to Warner Bros or the amusement park. My mother
also told me that if I get normal marks I´ll be grounded for a month and a half.
Then my father told me that I needed to be grounded without TV, computer and the Wii."

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